Paul

= Paul's writing sample = = = = My name is Paul and I am 16 years old. The best sport I ever played was basketball. My dad bought me a small hoop when I was two years old. I hated it. I only wanted to play with it when a friend came over. Otherwise, it did not interest me. But in second grade, I asked my dad if I could play on the parks and recreation team. I was horrible. = = = = Draft 2 = = = = My name is Paul and I am 16 years old. The best sport I ever played was basketball. My dad bought me a small hoop when I was two years old. I hated it. I only wantedto play with it when a friend came over. Otherwise, it did not interest me. But in second grade, I asked my dad if I could play on the parks and recreation team. I was horrible. But I practiced shooting hoops at home in my driveway. After a few weeks, I could shoot three pointers. I felt like Michael Jordan. = = = = Draft 3 = = = = My name is Paul and I am 16 years old. The best sport I ever played was basketball. My dad bought me a small hoop when I was two years old. I hated it. I only wantedto play with it when a friend came over. Otherwise, it did not interest me. But in second grade, I asked my dad if I could play on the parks and recreation team. I was horrible. But I practiced shooting hoops at home in my driveway. After a few weeks, I could shoot three pointers. I felt like Michael Jordan. I became a beast on the basketball court. I could shoot from any angle. One day I want to play in the NBA. = = =