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=Assignment:= Students will write a narrative essay on the “The Best Thing I Ever...” You fill in the blank and decide what to write about. It could be the best food you ever ate, the best video game you ever played, the best friend or pet you ever had, and so on. Use creative words to tell you story. = = =Draft 1= The best thing I ever ate was mac and cheese at Elbow Room. I really enjoyed eating it; it tasted great.

=Draft 2= The best thing I ever ate was mac and cheese at Elbow Room with my friend Anne Marie. We went to Elbow Room in West Hartford during a break while we were studying. I ordered the mac and cheese because it is my favorite. I really enjoyed eating it; it tasted delicious. The mac and cheese reminded me of when I was small, and my mom use to make it for us. I love mac and cheese.